Now this is a story
all about how my life
got twisted upside down
and id like to take a minute
just sit right there
ill tell you how i became the god
of a lookout in the air.

In... West city, born and raised.
Huntin' dragonballs is what I do most of my days.
Chillin' out maxin', relaxin' all cool.
Killing saibamen outside of turtle school

When a couple saiyans, they were up to no good.
Started blowing **** up in my neighbourhood.
I got in one epic fight and everyone got scared
when I transformed and threw hellzone grenades up in the air.

I whistled for a cab and when it came near
I checked my dragon-radar and a ball was right here
if anything I could say that this cab was rare
but I thought nah forget it, yo-home to my lair!

I pulled up to a tower around 7 or 8
I yelled to the cabbie yo homie smell ya later!
Looked at my kingdom I was finally there.
To sit on my throne as the god in the air.

P.s. I know there's a lot of mistakes in grammar/spelling.. but I rushed this. Lol
P.p.s. I know this might not be the right forum for this, but hey, I thought it was funny.

Well done, I like the way you integratued db with fresh prince

I've seen a few funny parodies of the Fresh Prince rap involving Dragon Ball before, but this was very well written. I'm going to move this into the "Evething Else" section so people without accounts can see it.

Doesn't fit the music that well but it's still good.

Doesn't fit the music well? Do you mean that you can't say it to the FP theme song? Because I can :P. It was pretty hard to think up decent parts that would flow well with the theme of DBO :P But most of it came instantly

Thank you for the comments and feedback though, I thought it was funny, as did my guild when I wrote it there... lol

nice DBO fresh prince rap it was cool have u try using beats to it?

My only criticism of this is simple. It says they were born and raised in West City, yet they seem to be a Namekian due to the fact they can use what you call the "Hellzone Grenade." Seems strange to me. :/

Well if you want to get super technical. But who says every Namekian is naturally born in the namekian starter area? Keyword is that it's the *starting* Location, doesn't mean they all have to be born there, I'm sure they could spit out an egg anywhere they like as Piccolo Jr. (The one we know mainly in DBZ was born in a forest when his egg hatched) but that's just my opinion anyway.

I know, it's just me being critical. I kind of thought it was somewhat unusual, though, so I figured I'd point it out.

Dude that was the ****ing ****! BRAVO!!!